Hi John,

How are you? I want to tell you
about my bad experience in France.

A week ago
, my boyfriend and I, went to visit a little maritime city, called La Rochelle. We decided to go through the Landas forest because we didn´t want to pay the expensive toll rates ton the motorway, and besides, ito take profits tsuche a beautiful landscape.

Wh
enilst we were talking about the few cars that we were seeing duriong the route a black smoke w cament out tof the engine, and suddenly the car stopped. Our mobiles didn´t work there, and it was raining.

We waited in
to the car, in order to see if another car passed. The forest was very dark, because of the trees and tall bushes. When the rain stopped, we walked around looking for a village.

Two hours later
, we found a camp sing te, and a very kind couple drove us in their car to a garage. The mechanic went to pick up the car, so that he could fix it in the garage. Thisat night we had to sleep in a hotel. Next day the mechanic toldgave us the worst possible news, the car had an expensive pieceart broken, and he had none in stock at thisat moment.

Finally, we stayed in the camp
singte, until the mechanic repaired the car. We went back bto collecauset the car.   Thece biptll was  very expensive.

Anyway, I would like you
to come and visit us latesoon.

Love,

Mite

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