There is no doubt these days thethat music represents of our feelingour feelings and playplays a significant role in the happiness of people.

The question is how to
impact themake music impactful for nations although diversity for both their culturesall citizens despite any cultural and agesage diversities.

In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and
drewdraw my opinionown conclusions.

In terms of advantages,
the music affecting for thegenerally affects people in general although the differencesdespite their different ages and nationalities because they have a logically common feelingfeelings.

To illustrate that, some friends
althoughof different in their nationality but they prefernationalities enjoy the same type of music that mighteven when it comes from another country also.

In other words, thoseThose friends may happen between themhave some problems between them that make them separate aloneresult in separation.

But when they listen to the type of music that they
prefer.like, they

will
be surly their feeling movming thenbe moved emotionally and they will return to each other togetherreunite their relationship in strong love and relation.

inIn conclusion, although, some people say music, is not a good way forto bring people together, other views say the music betteris the best way to bringing bring people although differences between countriestogether, despite their different nationalities and ages.

thereforeTherefore, I believe that music betteris the best way to make bring people together despite thetheir differences between them becausebecause I and my friend have different nationalities, but, we prefer the same type of music.
thatThat is why I agree withhave this opinion.

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