In weour opinion, we prefer “Feeding the 5000”5000, because this event helphelps general people and gives food in general, and not just soup, like the Disco Soup parties. Also, the Feeding the 5000 is better than Disco soupSoup because it offers a variety of food healthy food and it's more delicious than another foods . This festivity it's celebrated inand it is not a party because many people do not like parties. By last,, London has more supermarkets than other countries, but this event is not celebratecelebrated in other places because the people don´t interesting havearen't interested in having a good diet and eateating healthy food. It's objective is for people who consume healthy food like fruits and vegetables.

For thisThese reasons isare why we choosebelieve this festival is better than Disco soup.heSoup. The products in Feeding 5000 is the most recommended for human consumption.

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