The plot is very well. It is not overwhelming nor goetting off the topic. Lawrence started the story with a swift opening, almost like a tale for children. He started as "There was toa women who was beautiful...". In the same opening the writter illustrates Hester’s feelings and her relationship with her children, which helps the reader have a better understanding of the story. The structure of the plot is well organized. Most of the conflict started after Paul asked heris mother what was luck in which she replies "it's what causes you to have money...". It was clear to Paul that the lack of money and luck was the concern of his mother. In fact, Paul stateold his uncle this was the reason why he was gambling. "I started it for mother. She said she had no luck, because Father is unlucky, so I thought if I was lucky, it might stop whispering ". This made reference to the house whispering "there must be more money". The author also exemplifyies who influenced Paul into horse racing and with what money he began to play. Paul said to his uncle "you gave me that ten-shilling note I start winning with...". Also, the confession that Hester made thsatys her "family has been a gambling family" was intriguing and according to the plot. All these sequences of events were clear and important for the development of the story. When Paul was described as a "wild-eyed and strange" and his mother of having "sudden anxiety about him and almost anguish" one can imagine that something terrible would happen. The death of pPaul at the end was deliberate by the author. The plot is very nice and leaves nothing to be desired. It covers the expectations and the end hooked thinking what happened to Hester.
Lawrence since the beginning of the story gave a clear statement of what the theme of the story was. In this case
, the theme is very common and that many people are aware of it. The meaning of the history is that the wealth and lucky dono't always bring happiness. A clear example is when Uncle Oscar tells Hester "My God Hester, you're eighty-odd thousand to the good, and poor devil of son to the bad...". Lawrence development of the story was very wellgood. His message that people give more value to material things and social status was clear. One example is that Hester was described as a cold woman twhato had no affection towards her children. Lawrence states that, "when her children were present, she always felt the center of her heart go hard”. Also, Hester and her husband have enough money for the “social position which they have to keep up” and they still “felt themselves superior to anyone in the neighborhood”. The writer made it clear that the characters primary worries was the money. A voice in the house even whispers, “There must be more money”.

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