The person I admire most is my best friend.
A. What / why did he do to be the person I admire?
1. Couldn’t find anyone else like him, and he is my fiancé. My mom told me you should admire whom you love.
2. He worked in a company and he had scholarship inat the same time.
B. The qualities he has.
1. Determined.
2. Courage.
The person I admire the most is my best friend. His name is Mohammad Al-gothy. From the moment that we first talked to each other I knew that he was somebody different; mysterious in a way. He is the one I look up to always, and words cannot describe what an awesome and great man he is. I have learned a lot about him, and I respect the person that he is. I chose him because I couldn’t find anyone else like him. He is really a superman because he worked in Saudi Arabia as a Satellite Engineer, and had a scholarship to be able to open his own company, later, when he later coame back to our home. I am pleased to say he set his goal in spite of the many struggles in his life. I am so proud of him. I admire how he has handled stress, managing to assist me and the other students who need help, because he is the leader at Saudi Students Association in Vancouver. Also, I admire Mohammad because he is determined, and has courage. His wife died 2 years ago, but he continues his education here in Canada, and he wants me to be his wife. He got his bachelor’s degree from Hal University, and now is completing his education by getting a Master’s degree in UBC. He is encouraging me to study medicine in Canada, or anyplace I want. He is the sunshine of my life, and if there is someone to pick who I admire most from all the people in my life, it would be my fiancé, Mohammad.
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