mMy new phone.....
mMy story began like this. oOne day I checked my mailbox theand I saw a phone -sized box. sSo I taooke it with me and then brinought it to my room. so aAfter entering my room I'm opened up my box. fFrom that day my life changed. mMy story just begian. tThat little thing gave me a shock with its huge electricityal power., and I'm be absorbed by that phone . when I'm realised I'm not alonymogere in mythe world that iI lived in before . And this new world is better than mine in my mind.i It's just like video games with monster weapons and really like video games, because iI can see a bar at the bottom of my head.

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