I will never forget that day. That's wenwhen I havehad my birthday. I got up at about six o'clock, because I had to gogo to my school. When I finished school, I driveddrove to my house (drived(drove, because I need to get to house by bus). I did not know anything then that there would be a big party.

When I went to do my homework, suddenly I heard "happy B-dayHappy Birthday to you" and I went downstairs. I saw my family who was holdholding a birthday cake. I was very happy!

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