It's all in the past.
I w
aoke up yesterday morning and I geott out of bed.
It iwas a beautiful day. The sun was shining and the wind was blowing.
I decided that I would go for a walk. I started by walking down my road. I pushed open my gate and closed it behind me.
I walked for miles and miles along a country road.
I even went to visit my aunt.
Along the way, I passed a young man selling fruit.
How much are the apples? I ask. ‘\
£1 for a bag, he sayid.
I payid the man and I continued to walk.
I eate all of the apples except for one, which I dropped on the ground,. tThey are delicious.

After a while I me
et another man, this man haved a camel.
The camel was a special camel, it haved no humps.
What is his name? I asked the man.
His name is Humphree, sayid the man.

I walk for a very long time
, and soon the sun begian to go down.
It is beautiful, I love sunsets.
I geot home at about 12:30. I iwas very tired, normally I go to bed at 10:00.
I put on my pyjamas, rubbed my hands together and went straight to bed.
As soon as my head hit the pillow I faell asleep.
That iwas the best walk of my life, I loved it. The next day I called my mother and telold her all about it.

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